Semarang
State University
Semarang
State University (SSU) is a state university located in the capital city of
Central Java province. According to detik.com, it has been awarded as the 4th most favorite campus in
Indonesia this year. The students that study in this campus are about 40,000
students. There are eight faculties in this university, they are: Faculty of
Education Science, Faculty of Languages and Arts, Faculty of Social Science,
Faculty of Mathematics and Natural Science, Faculty of Engineering, Faculty of Sport Science, Faculty of Economics, and Faculty of Law. It has a unique program.
The program is conservation. As a conservation university, this campus forbids
the students to ride motorbikes and cars in campus area. It also plants many
trees in the campus to support go green. Beside environment conservation, it also conducts moral conservation. Through moral conservation, we’re supposed to
pray on time, polite in our friendship, and wear suitable clothes in
the campus.
For my beloved friend Hesti,
BalasHapusYour writing is good. Not every body can write like you have done. However, there are some words you should change to be better. These are:
a. Faculty of Technique --> Faculty of Engineering
b. SSU words are many, it will be better use pronoun--> It
c. The last sentence. It is meaningful if you change into --> Through moral conversation, we’re supposed to pray on time, polite in our friendship, and wear suitable clothes in the campus.
You have worked hard for doing this work. Keep on writing activity and with my pleasure I will be your reader.
Thankyou.